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This key,
this Skeleton Key,
has so much potential to move us Forward,
to unlock the places we Need to go,
but like its name suggests,
it is slowly deteriorating.
Its shiny and smooth metal,
is Rusting and Flaking Away,
revealing nothing more,
than Broken and blanched white bone,
that tried to Hide beneath layers of iron.
It is what hinders us.
It is an ancient past,
that wants to Live again.
But broken bones can be Splinted and Mended,
and keys can be Reforged,
and we Can move on through New doors.
when memories from the past come up after being suppressed, remember that you can choose NOT to live through it again, and instead, coat it with more lead to sink back down.
Because nothing is ever truly forgotten.
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poetryprince Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
i love the way your poem flows.
....from constructive to semi sad and back to hopeful inspiration...
also the word choices and sentences are very well done in my opinion.
it is a great synopsis of what a person or life can be with or without this jaded world
thanks for posting it and sharing your thoughts :)
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Zylund Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you soo much for your feedback! It is very much appreciated!
I am glad that you enjoyed it so much and have such high opinions of the piece *bows*
Have a terrific rest of your day or night!
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poetryprince Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
your welcome, ... and the same best wishes back at you
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Zylund Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Many thanks~
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Meowmeowcat1 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
Nice rhymings!!
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Zylund Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I rhymed? ^^;
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Meowmeowcat1 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
You rhymed at the end...
Did you not mean to?? Lol!
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Zylund Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha no I didn't even realize I rhymed xD
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Meowmeowcat1 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Writer
Lol!!
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Zylund Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
>.<
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